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First Essay Scores

TimeMarch 08, 2013

to:All Students

Hello,

I added a longish note to the gradebook for this first essay, but since most of you will not click on it in the gradcebook to read it, i am sending it out to you as an e-mail.

Here it is:

Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can rEssays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.Essays were scored according to the established rubric that we used for the Peer Editing the week before. However, I decided to add an extra 5pts to every paper since it is the first time that you are doing this sort of formal essay and because i have detected flaws in my Rubric which will be fixed before we use it again.

The scores are much lower than I (or you) would like to see, but they do reflect your need to improve your ability to write solid college level essays. So, please study the notations, corrections, suggestions and compliments that i wrote all over your essays. They (and the low grades) are there to encourage you to do better in the future and to suggest ways that you can improve your writing.

If you are very disappointed in your first Essay score, you have the option of rewriting it this time and turning it in next week for FULL CREDIT. You may rewrite the same essay, or drop the topic completely and write a fresh Definition Essay on a new topic.

Some of you turned in Essays that were TOO SHORT TO SCORE. If you got less than 10 points or none at all, I am requiring you to rewrite your Definition Essay. Clearly you did not understand the assignment at all and deserve a second chance to show what you can really do.